In IMRaD* reports, conclusions often fall under the discussion section. In some disciplines and journals, however, conclusions are separated from discussions. If this is the case for the paper you are working on, you may find the following description of common conclusion moves and sample language useful.
* IMRaD refers to reports with the structure Introduction-Method-Results-Discussion used in empirical research in natural and social sciences. Please refer to the Writing Center quick guide “Writing an IMRaD Report” for more explanations.
Move |
Sample Language |
Restating the aims of the study |
的aim of the present research was to examine … 的purpose of the current study was to determine … 的main goal of the current study was to determine … |
Summarizing main research findings |
这些实验证实…… |
Suggesting implications for the field of knowledge |
的results of this study indicate that … |
Explaining significance or contribution of the study |
的study contributes to our understanding of … |
Acknowledging limitations |
A major limitation of this study is… |
Providing recommendations for future research |
More research using controlled trials is needed to … |
Offering recommendations for practice or policy |
Greater efforts are needed to ensure … 的se findings suggest several courses of action for … Continued efforts are needed to make X more accessible to … |
的table is based on the information from University of Manchester’s Academic Phrasebankhttp://www.phrasebank.manchester.ac.uk/writing-conclusions/
As always, it is important to remember that depending on the discipline, journal, or purpose of the paper, certain moves may or may not be present.
Below is an example of a conclusion from a published research article. Notice how the moves are utilized in it.
斜体= Restating the aim of the study
Underlined= Summarizing main findings
斜体/Bold= Suggesting implications for the field of knowledge
Bold= Explaining significance or contribution of the study
Underlined/Bold= Acknowledging Limitations
斜体/Underlined=提供recommendations for practice or policy
This is one of the first studies to more comprehensively examine adolescents' knowledge of and attitudes towards e-cigarette ingredients, addictive properties, safety, perceived prevalence, acceptability, and regulation*…In our study of 9th and 12th graders, participants had more favorable attitudes towards and perceived less risk from e-cigarettes than cigarettes, and they expressed less support for policies that applied to e-cigarette than cigarette regulation. Participants believed that about 30% of their closest friends used e-cigarettes, which is approximately 10% higher than the self-reported rates in the sample…As we hypothesized, adolescents who have ever used tobacco perceive greater prevalence of e-cigarette use among their parents, siblings, and peers…的se findings demonstrate the importance of developing educational and health messages that correct misperceptions about use rates of e-cigarettes, since it is plausible that beliefs about how many peers use e-cigarettes can translate into increased adolescent e-cigarette use.Our findings are particularly concerning considering that positive perceptions of e-cigarettes may be increasingly common among teens…This study was limited to a school-based convenience sample recruited from California schools, and given the relatively low response rate, as is true with other convenience samples, it is unclear how representativeness and generalizable the sample is compared to California adolescents.
…health care providers need to understand basic facts concerning e-cigarettes as well as adolescents' attitudes towards these products since e-cigarettes are becoming a more predominant tobacco product among adolescents. (adapted fromhttps://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0091743516303413)
*this sentence also shows significance or contribution of the study
Choose three different papers in your discipline and look through their conclusions. What moves do you see? What language clues helped you identify these moves? Are there any moves missing in a way that impacts the interpretation of the conclusion? Consider doing this activity and discussing your findings with others.
Last updated 4/26/2018